jennifercatron 9 Posted December 9, 2006 This is in need of some serious drama. It's rather plain, although the setup is good, it needs a main element to pull it through the rough spots. Keep shooting, and I look forward to seeing how you create the drama. Link to comment
lonebearimages 0 Posted December 9, 2006 Personally, I think the drama is in the starkness and desolation of the scene. Wonderful composition, and I like the curved road leading the eye out into the salt flats. Well done, James. Cheers! Chris Link to comment
ian mcintosh 0 Posted December 9, 2006 I like it too! Especially the way the curve sweeps through the picture and the symmetry of the hills in the background. Well done! Link to comment
jlineen 5,655 Posted December 10, 2006 Thanks for taking the time to critique. I was drawn to the 'S' formed by the track seeming to merge with the far shore of the lake. I agree that it could use a little something to act as a focal point- I think the person is too small to make an impact. Link to comment
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