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I liked the background a lot (and of course, the girl!!!) ...

comments? Thanks!

Tomas, que onda amigo?

 

the model is cute, the pose is good, the background is good too... compositionally though it doesn't do much for me. I'd pick different angles to shoot at, be a little more aggressive in your composition.

 

just my thoughts...

 

feliz navidad.

jim baker

Evidently you preferred the background - as it's in focus and she isn't (despite the sharpening). The slightly-off-parallel lines seem careless. Interesting idea though.