alberto.conde 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Your opinions and critiques are welcome.Sunset of October 15th,2005 in Yanguas (Soria). Slide film Velvia 50 with a Polarizer filter.f8 and 1" exposure. Tripod. Link to comment
arash khoshghadam 0 Posted November 30, 2006 You have accomplished a magnificent job of capturing both the hues in the sky and the details in the foreground-something very hard to achieve in digital cameras. The composition is technically regarded: the horizon in the one-third and the rubble on the right in the 1/3 proportion, but there is one drawback: the house on the left is too near the left edge leading the eyes out of the frame. It also annoyingly competes for attention with the rubble on the right, being of the two equal masses, the two doors halve the attention between them. I suggest a 6 in x 8 in crop that leaves out the right house so that the viewers attention can stay focused on the rubble and lead around the colorful sky. Link to comment
azenall 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Los tonos violaceos del cielo, presentes. Veo tu foto y la propuesta y sigo en mis trece: cada foto son millones de fotos. Mi abuela lo decia mas claro: para gustos hay colores. Y para expresar una idea no solo hay modos sino ideas diferentes. Link to comment
rafael zapata 1 Posted November 30, 2006 Fantastica toma , me gusto de veras , saludos Link to comment
alberto.conde 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Your proposal is very interesting and your analysis most helpful. Link to comment
federomero 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Estas construcciones forman parte del territorio. Link to comment
carmenlafuente 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Me encantan las imagenes con edificios o ruinas de otros tiempos. A esta ademas le acompa?a un cielo muy bonito. Link to comment
sideris 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Caramba con esto, no se como lo has hecho pero el equilibrio entre tonalidades y luz del cielo con los detalles del primer plano son para el aplauso, y esa atmosfera de tristeza y abandono solo se logra con un manejo muy sutil y exacto de la luz. Gran composicion. Link to comment
pepa_de_rivera1 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Me gustan los dos encuadres, pero ese cielo tan esplendoroso y deslumbrante anula la parte inferior con sus tonos bonitos pero apagados. Link to comment
juanra 0 Posted November 30, 2006 Gran imagen y bien trabajada el equilibrio de luces genial. Saludos Link to comment
pepmir 0 Posted December 1, 2006 Aqui si que creo que has conseguido un buen ambiente. Link to comment
curra 0 Posted December 1, 2006 El cielo es tan bonito que roba la mirada al resto que queda pelin obscuro y mon�tono. Te sugiero que trates algunos matorrales incrementando ligeramente contraste o saturacion o...... lo que quieras , para llamar la atencion, INHO Link to comment
carsten_ranke 0 Posted December 3, 2006 Very atmospheric shot, well exposed. I like the idea with the crop Link to comment
belerofonte9811 0 Posted December 4, 2006 Wow, parece sacada de un cuento, me recuerda a algunos parajes de nuestra tierra Gallega, increible rango dinamico. Link to comment
colin carron 58,916 Posted December 9, 2006 Alberto, I prefer your original upload as the composition seems to have more movement. The eye travels from foreground to the trees to the sky then back to bottom left and then round again. So I would leave the rop as it is and I aslo admire the muted colour of the fg against the bright sky. Link to comment
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