A bit chilly moment

Laura in strong side light. Comments appreciated!

Nice composition...well done, nice DOF

The face is blown, the hair looks unwashed and greasy, the shadow is too dominant and makes the pic look fake (maybe try to put the flash up higher next time), then there's the dark edge on the right side and the upper corners seem to have vignetting however that may be the light. The horizontal lines on the left side are pretty distracting too. The expression of the model also looks a bit unconfortable and I don't see a "chilly moment" in this picture. I like the coat however.

Well Boris, sometimes it happens that

when you shoot outdoors, there are "shapes"

behind the models stemming from the background

objects.

 

Its true that there is a bit too much vignetting in the

picture (it was done in PS artificially) and it is in a bit

of a contradiction with the shadow. Other than that,

I disagree with your comments.