Father, forgive me..

Very well done...though I don't like the title...brings back bad memories!!!!

6/7.

I'd rather let the viewer unroll the mystery packed in this shot himself than give him a straight answer to his puzzlement. The first time I saw your shot, I was working out the mystery till suddenly my eyes discovered the answer. what a pity.

I was enjoying the moments. I was on the impression that she was mourning in the death of a kin, focusing on her black veil. I can still sense the quiver of a deep

sorrow on her lips. that's the power in your shot. the lips are everything in your shot.