Bye-bye

by Kelly Landrum

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Gallery: Livingstone College, Beautiful People II

Tags: seeking critique

Category: Portrait

Published: Monday 20th of November 2006 01:25:19 AM


Comments

Landrum Kelly
I think that you are right, Pnina, although I rather like having the doll in there. As pure portrait work, of course, it would be better to clone it out. --Lannie

Pnina Evental
Lannie, a very good portrait and her gesture is wonderful, again good light and well exposed .Her hand with her toy is a bit a distraction, as my eye is attracted to it. I thought that a square format will help concentrate only on her, as she is very sweet. what do you think?

Kim Slonaker
I agree with Pnina because the doll's face isn't really showing enough to provide interest. I think it's more of a distraction because it's hard to make it out. The girl is very sweet and I think should be the main focus of interest. Just my two cents... Nice lighting and tones.

Tyler Wind
Very nice candid shot with great DOF. Strong work Lannie!

Landrum Kelly
Kim, I know that the composition is stronger without the doll, but this is a candid shot, and she was carrying the doll, and so I left it in. Thanks, Tyler. --Lannie

Landrum Kelly
Bye-bye Thanks for viewing.

--Lannie

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