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In the Fashion-shop XVIII...


ruudalbers

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I have seen this photo several times since you raised it the forum, and I decided to think it with calm, because from first moment there was something in her that I did not like, and did not know what. Compar the image with many of your other photographies, where demuestars to have a great eye to capture frames very obtained, but? fails something here here. I see the idea include the green line and place the dummy in the diagonal superior left to inferior right, but visually my reading is cut in the direction of the glance of the dummy. Something fails. Encounter little space after that alive glance. Perhaps the error was to include the green line and to forget to the dummy. I suppose that you can return to the place and organize the photo again.
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A fine shot with good colours. Perhap I would clone the green lines behind to that focus is placed on the model. Just my opinion.
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I think Cherlyn might have a point about the green line, Ruud, but very good in any case. A fine addition to this series.
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Ruud, nice portrait , good exposure, well placed diagonaly on the frame. I agree with Cherlyn about the frame, but I like the solid BG, that accentuate the nice colors of the young man.
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