Published: Monday 13th of November 2006 07:36:16 PM
Fianlly, maybe Allison is right ... lol ... I could remove or darken the area on the upper right hand corner ... ! Many thanks for the comment Mel.
I like the clothes tossed to the front of the bed. The model could be in more of a subtle pose. As is, she looks awkward. The night table also bothers me, especially the cord hanging down from the clock.
Thanks Allison. I'm just going out shopping. I'll buy a cordless clock ... :-) As for the awkward look, I didn't pose her. I can conceive that it may appear so to someone else, but it seems to me closer to a natural pose one may assume when one is alone, and hence possibly closer to art. As for as imagerie is concerned, do you find that it spoils the picture? I hope some may find it attractive, at any rate it certainly is both graceful and sensual to me. That being said, in no circumstance do I mean that everyone does not have a right to their opinion and thank you for expressing yours.
not sure how I feel on this one. Stunning subject and pose but lacks something. I am not sure what...
Mmmmm? Since when has any of your models had cloths on?
A moment's respite .. before and/or after a change of clothes ....