The look...

Please comment on this one for me. Thanks :)

Very good portrait with excellent focus.

vERY NICE PORTRAIT!!

Thanks, guys, for your comments. I like it too :)

This is great, Mark - you're making so much improvement! I see you've slightly whitened the whites of her eyes to make them stand out more. Good. Now, to make it even better, you should Heal Brush her little skin imperfections!! We girls are so vain...

Actually Shambhala, I did nothing to the whites ;) She has naturally very clear eyes. I also didn't do much to her skin. I wanted to post this as unaltered as possible

Mark :]

Your portraits are improving by leaps & bounds. Good work!

Very nice composition and use of light. Well done Mark. Regards, Kelvin.

Wonderful portrait, Mark!!!

Thank you both. I was really pleased with this one as well...

Mark

I love this, Mark! Really nice work. I think I MAY have cropped a little more of her forehead off, but that's strictly a personal opinion.

Mark, another winning portrait, The girls just love You, I can see it in their eyes, cheers Jana

Thank you both. I am honoured...

What captivating eyes. Really super portrait :) The close crop really accentuates her eyes. The only thing I would do if this were mine (and of course this is just personal preference), since her eyes are the subject of this image I would adjust the levels a bit to accentuate them even more. I hope you don't mind, I couldn't resist some play, easier to show than tell what I mean. Not better, just a different take on those wonderful eyes:)

Hi Jayme,

As ever, your show and tell is brilliant! Thanks for stopping by. Always a pleasure and an honour to have you comment on my work...

Mark :)

Hi Mark!

A new model? You have captured her face in a great way here she looks like a top model the eye sharpen is great. But I would prefer to keep the colours in this one, I think a low saturated image would be nice so I tried to work with it a bit to show you my vision of her in colour, I also darkened the background and added some hair to it.

 

(I have the psd if you want it)

 

Best regards Tore

 

Wow!

I don't even think my colour version would look as good as your manipulation!

Mark, I really like the expression here. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work with her. I like how she comprises the entire frame (with the exception of the spaces between her locks. Again, nicely captured and sorry for my absence from your images for so long.

This is an awesome portrait with strong character. Very well done

I am honoured by your comment...

Very striking features, a lovely model indeed.