Smile for me

Critics welcome

your other photos are better than this one. The model is nice, but as I can see, you used flash so light is too sharp. Face needs to be more sharp, and background is distracting. I like many of your other photos. Keep up the good work!

Thanks Pavle. I have difficulty when using the flash. I've been hesitating posting this one. I know the backgroung is confusing, but this tight crop made me decide.

Pretty model, but there is too many things in the background that distracts in this picture, try to change ore darken the background in Photoshop. Ore if she is a friend shoot her again try different environments and I am sure you will come up with some great shoot.

 

Regards Tore

 

 

Thanks Tore for your time and knowledge. I'm trying to improve my skills, as to shooting and as to PC manipulation afterwards. I liked your new background and it gave me new ideas.

We need to see more of this lady.

Helo Mick, I'll certainly try. From my portofolio, she's also the "Decorated Leg" on http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=5137998. Regards