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DIdn't even notice what her shirt said till I put it on the

computer. Anyway, thoughts as to what works or doesn't here? These

are My first real foray into street in this folder, so love to learn

from anyone willing to teach.

 

Thoughts on the shadowy part on the lower right?

Jeff, esta es la que mas me ha gustado del folder. Para mi esta perfecta de encuadre y de todo pero se me va la vista hacia esa sombrita de la derecha que se podria muy bien clonar o cortar.

Jeff....esta me gusta mucho la toma.... me sobra esa sombrita a la derecha.... y no te preocupes por los treses..... nos los ponen a todos sin saber muy bien por que razon.... lo que importa ( por lo menos para mi...) es la critica constructiva....no la puntuacion...

Yes, Jeff. You know it. That shadow should go. Again, in B&W would look great.

yeah. I wasn't sure about the shadow since in away, it gives some balance to the upper left corner shadow and niche (sp). Haven't looked at this one in B&N yet, but sounds like it'd be nice

Convert it and show, please!

All has been said above. It is a good shot and the B & W I really beleive enhances it.

 

I took the liberty again, see what you think.

 

Ciao.