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For me, the subject 'bride' does not resonate much with the image.

The lighting is harsh. I am not sure what you were going for. I would be interested to know what part of her as a bride you thought was coming across.

I like the positioning of the flower in the frame and also like the negative space, maybe it would have worked more if you could have captured a differnt expression or had eye contact to convey more emotion to the viewer.