roof in a beanfield

please critique

Good colors and an interesting subject. Not criticising as such but your horizon is a little uneven. Still a great pic.

Hi Mike, seems to be a ship sinking in a sea of soybeans. Unusual but quite beautiful sky.......Jim

I like the compasition, but I don't like the colors. Try making it a black and white. Maybe try monochrome in channel mixer in PS.

I used the green channel mixer all around. I did a curves adjustment so you could excentuate the lines in the grass. then made a mask over the sky on the curves. I think this brings more attention to the barn and not the sky.

Although I like Josh's B&W version very much...the mimicking colors of the red and green sky in the front of the barn do it for me...as for composition the little tilt in the horizon could be straitened...and if I was going to print this I would go real BIG...maybe crop a tad tighter on the right side and a tad off the bottom...what you have here is a nugget!nice job...Juan

Great texture and colors.. Love it...congrats...LJ

I love the strangeness of the colours and the scene but I agree the horizon could be straightened. The B&W version is an interesting alternative - I think the contrast and balance changes could also be made to the colour version to add impact.

 

Best wishes, Jonathan.