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by Peri John

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Gallery: Glamour Photography 1

Tags: nude seeking critique

Category: Nude and Erotic

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X Resolution : 72.0000000
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Software : Adobe Photoshop 7.0

Published: Saturday 14th of October 2006 04:52:54 PM


Comments

John Peri
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Arjen van de Merwe
Cute idea. Nice expression. There is too much happening in the background. The doors on the side fram her nicely. This type of image benefits from a slick approach.

Thomas Collins
I think Ken stated it well - sex appeal. Fresh, spirited and inviting. Now that's a jam session that I would like to partake in! :-)

David Blair
Not sure on the gaussain blur. Backdrop is not working for me on this one John.

Ken Dibert
Sax appeal!

John Peri
Thanks Thomas, and she really does play a mean Sax!

Fran Garcia
nice shoot John, I like the model expresion, good composition

John Peri
Fair enough,thank you David.

Jim Phelps
Foto Above John, Ilike the foto above better because it is a tighter shot. There is less background to distract the viewer. Also, I like the model's facial expression better in the second image.

Leonardo Villalobos
great work, love it !

John Peri
These are textbook considerations Adara. Though I am indeed an amateur, I would like to consider myself a litttle past measuring the position of the subject with respect to the remainder of the image. A photo is succesful when it is visually pleasing. If not, then it's not.

Adara Schwartz
A nice photo but what makes it less appealing to me is that too many distractions compete for attention. Also, I'm just trying to be helpful, but placing the model square center in the photograph gives it much more of an amateurish look. I'd like to see more depth with shadows and have more light fall upon her face. A hair light would add quite a bit, as well.

John Peri
Practice on Sunday afternoon .. .

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