Windows

I like the abstract potential of this image but for an abstract I'd show less of it. Please see my version above where I rotated your image one degree left to straighten the window, adjusted the sharpness and hues a bit, and then I cropped the image.

Many many thanks for your post.

Of course, it is better than my image, particularly since I've again forgot to crop something in the upper part. I'll do so before requesting for critique ...

Indeed, the windows, the vegetation and the patterns on the wall are too different to make a balanced composition with both windows, but I'll try to see what people think of asymmetry.

renewed thanks and kind regards

Maria

I think the motif is OK, but the photo has a strong blue cast. I've made an correction attempt, asuming the white windows frames and the grey, unpainted part of the wall are colorless. I also agree with Shawn's cropping suggestion, but would keep slightly more at the top. So my suggestion looks like this (see attached file)

Great shot dear Maria, this has an excellent abstract potential.

Regards

I have just looked at your portofolio and now I recall that your photos of Lisbon left a strong impression on me. I was trying to catch some similar compositions of coloured plaster in some of my Kiskunfelegyhaza photos indeed.

Thank you for your comment.

Yes, this photo needs improvement - but I see it attracts more comments before it is done, so I'm going to leave it as it is :)

see you around

Maria

thank you so much for your appreciation!

You might want to look at Jon's work, there are plenty of wall compositions reminding abstract paintings ...

thanks for the visit

Maria

I decided to ask for critique before doing the improvements (it is

clear to me that some cropping above would be necessary), since the

comments (so far) seem to be more interesting so :)

thanks for looking

Maria