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Gallery: Artistic Nudes in black and white 1

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Category: Nude and Erotic

Published: Wednesday 27th of September 2006 10:50:20 AM


Howard Lipan
Great work. Maybe it is my credo "less is more" that is at play, but why so much additional stuff when the lovely nude model is the focus of attention? I really admire the way you photographed the model -- I am drawn to the parallel curves of her tummy and derriere and simply wonderful curve under her heavy left breast. I just find the other stuff distracting -- the statue to the left seems irrelevant, yet its tack-sharp focus diverts my attention, and the expansive background is properly out of focus (DoF), so why afford it so much image real estate?

John Peri
I think that you may well be right. It could just be a case of over exuberance on my part (though that chair would have to go too).

John Peri
Form and Figure .

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