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To me the shot seems to be a nice and simple portrait, without being boring. All my attention was immediately drawn to the model's face, and specifically the eyes, which is the goal I suppose. The only thing that really jumps out to me that might have improved the picture is to have slightly warmer tones, and the line of glass is a little distracting, but was part of the scene I realize. Take any advice from me with a grain of salt as I am very much a beginner :)

Adam

Tanks for your feedback, Adam. I've attached a version with slightly warmer tones, and cropped away most of the glass line. I feel I had to crop at the sides too, to keep the balance of the picture.

Superb portrait, Jon. Tove's pose and expression are unique. A delight of forms, colors and light. Lovely Tove! Congrats!

PS.- I prefer the second version with excellent cropping and size. Regards!