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the idea is wonderful, but i would not write anything, the scene says a lot.

 

grate work.

I feel this picture has potential but apart of the text, I think I've missed something in the treatment... As has been said on a color version I probably should have used flash for example.

If anyone has other ideas please do help.

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Very touchy. Great title and the composition. Lovely tonal range. Like it.

If you want, have a look...

lovely. very tender. i think there is nothing wrong with the treatment. i think flash would be too harsh on this very soft moment.