Jebamony 3 Posted September 14, 2006 Please take the time to Critique &or Comment. Thank You. Link to comment
j.k._york 0 Posted September 14, 2006 you have a wonderful pattern here Julius. nice lighting, but the pattern is disrupted by the upper right. i would tighten the crop Link to comment
dmo_galleries_chicago_phot 0 Posted September 14, 2006 I love the pattern. I would like to see a little bit brighter version--maybe on a sunnier day to create more contrast between the areas in light and the shaded areas. I don't say that to be critical--I just think it would turn a pretty good photo into an excellent one. Link to comment
Jebamony 3 Posted September 14, 2006 Thank you all for your comments and suggestions. I totally agree with the cropping. Because this side of this building is indoors a sunnier day may not have helped that much. If you any one is in interested in tweaking this image please let me know and I will upload the unaltered [raw format] to SendSpace. Link to comment
aepelbacher 0 Posted September 14, 2006 I don't know that I could or would tweak anything ... I agree with the comments about cropping about 15% off the top ... and I am sure that brighter would work, but it's certainly interesting the way it is now. It's not about bright or dark ... it's about that fabulous pattern repeating itself. Well seen! Link to comment
ada-ipenburg 0 Posted September 16, 2006 Very nice picture Julius! Nice viewpoint. I love this kind of pattern pictures. I agree with the others which suggest to cropp the shot at the top. Greetz, Ada:-) Link to comment
ayyadalnimer 0 Posted October 21, 2006 Very nice B&W picture and abstract pattern and I agree with the others which they suggest to crop the shot about 15% at the top...I love the gray tones, light, and shade...please do not change anything? Link to comment
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