A Sepia tone study

Two friends in Sepia tone.

Hi Alec! Tonality is, of course, brilliant due to the superb lighting and delicate post-processing. Therefore as far as your study, I would give a 10/10 :)

I do have a compositional nit-pick though. I feel the model on the right is being 'compressed' by the frame, i.e. the crop is too tight at the top. Also, I feel that the disparity in height between the two models is a bit disturbing. Maybe if the model on the right had not sat so high, it would give the photo a bit more 'compositional harmony'.

That's just my two cents :)

Best regards from Kenya,

Mark

Otra belleza de retrato en color sepia, gran composicion y especial encuadre, saludos cordiales Alec,

Great lighting!

Greetings,Jim

You're right Mark, perhaps I should have asked them to change places. Julio, Jim thanks for the kind words.

Yes,very nice tones lovely composition and light.well done

 

Regards Shuki

Fantastic studio work, subtle lighting, great sharpness & tonal range, really smooth & sweet capture, Alec!!! Best regards.

Yes Alec! The farang likes this one! As has been said a little more space above the model on the right would help!

Shuki, Richard thanks for commenting. David, it's a cropped image so there is a lot of space on top if I wanted to include it. Guess it's just personal preference. No problem to change if required. Thanks for the advice.