"The ascent". Tha tallest mountain in Southeast Asia - Mount Kinabalu. Borneo, Malaysia

great lighting and perspective.

I like how the figures add a sense of scale.

regards C.

Best regards Claire!

PDE

Claire, 

This looks to be a most significant natural site.  While, I like your composition, the background has no detail, which is fine.  The background simply suggests distance and scale.  So, IMHO I think you should add more detail to the shadow areas of the mountain and to the foreground.  As I've tried this, I notice interesting elements of texture as well as people that enhance the image by adding scale.   I hope you understand that I wouldn't comment like this if I didn't think the image had nice possibilities.  I also recognize that you want the best of this image as a memento of your trip.  Regards.  Larry