6. nude & scantily clad girls The Gardener

David was looking for a new Gardener. This interviewee didn't know much about plants but David felt she had other qualities. She got the job.

 

Feedback Appreciated!

Hey David, love the directional nature of the light here and your composition. The image is a little hot (over-exposed) on the right - maybe due to the chili pepper or the sexy gardener - but very good nonetheless. Nice one! Regards, Kelvin.

The model looks rather emmaciated and uncomfortable. For those two reason, I think the pose is not so good. Cheers!

Kelvin, Thanks for the honest comment. I think the over exposure is more to do with the fact that I haven't properly calibrated the monitor on my new computer. I will have a play with it.

 

Daniel, I welcome comments on my photographs pertaining to the photograph. I would be grateful if you could keep your opinions about the people in my photographs to yourself.

There may be some over exposure on the right, I agree, but the image is a killer. I think this is one of the best you have done. It is very different for you and that may be part of the reason for my fascination with it. I hope there are more from this shoot coming soon.

 

The model is perfect for this image,

 

-Owen

Owen, Thanks for the comment. I do have other compositions from this shoot. I am fairly sure I will upload some of them.

David, I have problems with exposure too - so I checked with 2 monitors, Usually the Sony CRT is more accurate then the LCD. You got a strong, taut gardener, can you keep up? ^_^

Yes Alec! The left arm is a little too hot. It looks fine on the computer from which I uploaded it. I will have to recalibrate. The colour print version of this looks fine. I may upload it later for comparison.

This is indeed a great shot, I quite like the hot spots in this case. Awsome model

I must say that I was very lucky to meet this lovely woman. I am glad you like the picture of her. I hope to photograph her again. Unfortunately she is incredibly busy.

I've been looking at this one for a couple of days now, David, trying to decide what to say.

 

Needless to say, I prefer the b&w version, despite the hot areas on her left arm, etc.

 

And I definitely like this model! It may be the camera angle, but she looks tall for an Asian lady. And rather than "emaciated," I see her as nicely lean and angular, with good definition of the rib cage and abdomen. The lines of her face give her a very defining (and somewhat defiant) look as well. A very striking young lady.

 

The necklace is a nice touch, too...adding a nice visual point of interest, as does the texture of the wall.

 

And touching on the "hot spots" again just briefly...don't know if you've noticed, but there is a trend lately in the fash/glam world towards a certain hotness in the highlights. So who know, David? You may be on the cutting edge!

 

Very nice.

Thanks for the detailed comment Jim. There really isn't a lot I can say in reply. However, I am sure to post more photographs of this lovely model.