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comment pls, and not vote 3/3 and not say what is wrong or what is

better to do!! tks

You should adjust the levels so that this portrait doesn't look so grey. The teeth should be white, the darkest areas (pupils?) black.

Also, this portrait looks rather flat to me. For a more expressive portrait, think of the lighting... adding shadows can make a large difference. Or even just tilting the face slightly can help.

I second Paul comment's. This is a great portrait, the model is gorgeous!

Pherhaps you can do it again adding some extra lighting / reflectors, and also manage the contrast. Regards. Ruben