Girl with cell phone and white dress

I like the shot, but the composition hides the intimacy of the girl's face.

A tighter crop of the girl on the phone would help. There is too much distraction on the top and right side of the photo, and there is too much empty space on the bottom and to the left. Finally, the mirror line is not even which pulls away from the girl. Try rotating the photo to the right. You might even try converting to b/w.

Olivier.

Thank you very much for your feedback. Here are two new versions, one rotated and cropped, and another in black 'n white. The black and white version is not rotated - since there are less disturbing factors, I woud like to keep the slightly unaligned lines.

...and here is the b/w version: