gb3 6 Posted August 8, 2006 It's a flattering pose and image of the model. Not sure I like the border effect on the edges and it does seem a little hot in certain areas, but the composition, arrangement and overall exposure make it a success. -GB Link to comment
txstenyahoo.com 0 Posted August 8, 2006 as i look at this image i think perhaps there are two things going on: face and the rest of the body. they are at war. sexually, the bottom and breasts and torso and garter belt and stockings are what is attractive. the face, it seems to me, is not so sexual. the face is more of a character study. this person has lots of character in the face, but the face does not quite add to the sexual or erotic feeling of the image. it is a strong face, but there is nothing hidden or secret. it is all there. nothing to think about, no secrets. Since, i think, the attempt is to create an erotic or sexually attractive image, i would think less face more the-rest-of-it. More hints, more shadows, more coquettery. Maybe use the hat to hide the face a bit and bend the face away. draw the viewer in. leave something to the imagination. don't tell it all. i think bend the head away using the hat to conceal and bring in more torso and bottom (I'm a butt guy). And the hair looks a bit stringy. like it has just been washed. it is not abundant. more shadows more hints more suggestions more darkness....the face breaks the mood. the image is dispersed between two focuses . Just a few thoughts. Link to comment
txstenyahoo.com 0 Posted August 8, 2006 Regarding my previous comment, I still think this is a very nice picture that will have a long shelf life. And perhaps is part of a series of other character studies. Nice! Link to comment
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