Alone

For Critique.

I opened this image, so obviously it spoke to me. I can understand why you have the huge lead in in black from left top. I think it works well and is a good idea, well done. But it is spoilt a bit by placing the subject to low. And I would really love to see more of the second figure to the left of the woman in anguish _ for some context. I hope you cropped it and have the original. Tks. JH

I too wish that I could have tilted the camera another 2-3 degrees downward and about another 1-2 degrees to the left. I got this from a performance though and I couldn't reshoot though. I didn't crop it, so, this is about as best as it gets. I'm glad it still works at some level for you though.

Love the concept here but I think we really need to see at least the entire outline of the kneeling woman, and as JH comments, the glimpse of the reclining woman makes us want to see much more of her.