Sumatran Schoolgirls

by Downs Jim

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Gallery: Asia - Indonesia, Sumatra

Tags: seeking critique

Category: Travel

Published: Sunday 9th of July 2006 11:32:15 PM


Jamie Kraft
Another really nice image. The distant view of the leftmost subject contrasts with the polite attention of the other two and really makes the image. You could make a presentation to tie your images of kids from different places together. It could be called something like "So much in common, Childhood across political boundaries." It would a little time, but it would be really good, and it would draw more attention to your work. On another note, for me, it looks a little too much like you used flash, but that really draws attention to the subjects and away from the background.

Jim Downs
Charmers Thanks for comments.

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