The Flower Man

Thanks for critiques.

Classic tonal range. Regarding light, you may have used flash a bit high level, but the composition is so different that it doesn't take any minus point. Lovely shoot. Like it.

If you want, have a look...

Excelente retrato, bello color sepia, y muy original imagen, saludos cordiales Mohsen.

Because of the lighting, the subject is very flat and lacks interest. You seem to have too much space on the right with some competing elements. I don't believe you need that much space there. I do believe we often tend to put our subjects, unnecessarily way out of center.

Agar ke vaghe-an meekhay akkasit peeshraft kone, az oonayee ke faghat donbale nomre hastan va chahar kalame shoono zeere hame aksa copy meekonan, parheez kon!!

First about the photo, perhaps you're right. The photo is not cropped, this is the whole thing camera captured. The man was moving his face very fast. perhaps for not letting me take his photo. and from my 3 shots this is the best. I just thought a man with flowers on his head may be interesting for people. If I want to rate this photo myself, I give it not more than 4/6. And about the free space, I don't agree. there is no exact rule. putting in the center sometimes works, and maybe a little subject shown beside the border sometimes work. I'm not the master, you are. so I appreciate your opinion.

Thanks to Kaushik, Julio and Cyrus. Its my honor to see your comments on my photos, honestly.

Ok, Mohsen, you are right about the originality and it's probably more than 4. I know it's not about numbers but personal evaluation so that you know what I sincerely think abut the image. Without sincere input, one will never know where he or she is in his/her photographic work.

Best wishes.

good shot dear mohsen , it's a very sharpness photo , i think in this photo you used flash

Yeah, you're right. I did use flash. cuz the light was very low and the man was moving fast.

nice comp

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