Daily Ablutions

Hello!

Nice picture! I like the colors, the spirit, and the composition.

Well, here we are talking of personnal taste, but I will dare offer you my

humble hypothesis about something that COULD be done.

I think that in order to balance the masses in this composition, there should be

some water under the low left child. His hand reaches the frame of the pic.

The upper right child doesn't reach his side of the frame. This unbalance the comp a bit.

I've edited the pic to show you my point. If for any reason you wish me to delete this comment, do not hesitate, I'll understand.

PS: Your picture doesn't fit on a 1024X768 monitor. I'm not able to see it completely at once. It may be a good idea to shrink it a bit

so it will fit on most standard computer screens. People will enjoy it more :)

Best regards.