Mt. Lemmon

scanned b+w print, ilford mg pearl, 2 negatives, 2 enlargers, there

is actually a dull dusty sunset behind her, that wasn't printed, and

some lightning was added instead from another negative. any

comments most welcome, thanks.

I think the idea and composition are good. I would like to see more light on the model. I am also a bit upset that you have cut her toes off!

thank you David, the print is actually too large to fit in the scanner (she does have toes ) .... neil

I love the impact of this shot, and for me the reduced light on the model works perfectly, providing real mood, and drama. The subject suggests casual defiance within a possibly forboding situation. Excellent!!

toes would be nice, so on that point I agree with David. Otherwise this is quite original. the low light on the model for me only emphasizes the thin backlight of her curves. i don't have to see her in high key for my imagination to work. "danger, dead man's curve ahead?" regards, J.K.