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Gallery: Artistic Nudes in black and white 1

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Published: Wednesday 10th of May 2006 10:15:36 AM


John Peri
On the contrary Damian, I post my work in order to receive critique and I thank you for giving your opinion. In fact, my initial instinct on taking the photo was the same as yours, but on seeing the print I was worried about too much interference arising from the second couch on the right. Anyway, here are both versions for you to see. Again, thank you for your comment.

David McCracken
Obtrusive couch... I tend to agree with Damian. Having said that, I prefer the original to your alternate posting as the second couch seems obtrusive.

Damian Muszkiet
Fine model, but I think it wuould be better if moves the framing a little bit to the right, to follow her look... I will delet this comment if it hurts your photo. Bye for now dear John. (:

Damian Muszkiet
Hello! I must agree with you that vision of framing would be better like I said on the second (original) one, but factually disrutp the composition. Perfect kack to framing! Regards dear John (:

John Peri
Figure on couch A study in texture and form

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