Making his point

Excellent photo. Beautiful composition!

Your comments and critiques are always welcome. Thanks...Bill

Hi Bill, I think the composition is well done and the moment a nice candid moment, the clarity is very good -- but the highlights are a little hot. its the kind of shot that I would suggest trying in some version of black and white. the color doesn't add anything special, and black and white will enable you to play a bit more with the tones, both light and dark.