Hazel 2

Made using 2 halogen light and 2 sheet of paper.Nikon FM10, Nikon E

lens 75/150 mm. Comments appreciated thanks

Good composition , beautiful. Congratulations

I feel the face is a touch over exposed. The composition is fine but perhaps she should be a little more to the right. I would also consider a different background to show of her beautiful hair.

Thanks David. About the background I thought black was good, I had horrible results with white and grey...

Hello Yann. A beautiful striking and sensative portrait. I like your choice of black background. It highlights the skin of your subject. Good tight framing.

It's good that we all have our different ways. Great shot. Cheers.6/6

Very nice pose, composition and form. I do agree that the face seems just a tad overexposed, so that the highlights have little detail. This could perhaps be adjusted in Photoshop (with shadow/highlight sliders or curves), or perhaps the info is there in a raw file(?). Again, very nice and eye-catching, sensitive and touching.