Demonstration....

Dance in formation. The act of creating.

 

Thanks for your thoughts, Pnina

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Very nice picture Pnina, I like this one. Its simple yet interesting.

Good use of DOF and nice and sharp, I like the colour too.

 

DK.

I like those lines on the floor, how they introduce the idea of the linear into the scene (the left brain/ right brain juxtaposition.) I especially enjoy the anchor moment which for me is trying to figure out what the dancer on the floor is seeing & thinking (clearly there's unspoken contact with the mystery being in the fg.) Here I very much like the fact the fg dancer has no upper body, it makes the shot because we really can't try to make up our minds what the girl on the floor is experiencing, we lack the requisite information.

There's something about the straight edge of the door(?) in the bg - it works, and I wonder if that has something to do with the straight court-like lines.Best photo I've seen today - very strong composition.

Pnina, I particularly like the toning here. I like the interplay between the two subjects.

The door is parallel to the wide white line( starting under the seating dancer) and imo gives more ballance to the composition.

 

Thanks for your two comments, I see a very sharp and great observation of details!

 

I'm sure you will have the energy and vitality.... to come WITH ME( not as my shadow....lol) to the wonderful dance project!

 

Thanks for your comments that are very much appreciated.

 

Pnina

Appreciate your comments.Thanks.

 

Amar, you are so knowledgeable in that domain.Thanks Pnina

I feel a sense of tension, both physical - in the pose of the legs - and in the connection between the two people. The feeling of space is strong helped by the floor lines. The toning and colour is good though I wonder whether a more direct b&w approach might be better for publication.

A complete composition Pnina. There is a palpable connection between both subjects. Great foreground details and toning as well. The white lines add "drama" to your composition also. Regards, Kelvin.

Pnina

I like this one a lot you can feel the energy inside the image.The level of understanding between the teacher & student .

Very well seen. Beautiful work.

Colin, Kelvin and Chipsy, I appreciate your feedback which is importent.

 

Colin, I tried B/W, that color range is better imo.

 

Chipsy, it is a choreograph and a dancer that are working together on a new dance.

Don't you dare cross that line!!! The interesting part of her expression is that it leads me to read his even though I cannot see his face.

The lines are used as part of composition, so it stays like this.Your interpretation is right she is getting a demonstration. The whole process is fascinating, I'm all in it.....Thanks, I appreciate your following.

For me, this is the best of the last three submissions. You should write a poem to accompany this image.

i agree with Howard. the anonymous leggs convey a lot of authority. the white line provides unexpected structure. and the sepia toning works for me. one of the best in the whole series, IMHO.

Howard, thanks for your comments, My images are my poems ... you are the one to WRITE them....

 

Naftali, thanks for commenting and liking it.

 

Pnina.

I really like this image a lot, the color tone goes really well with the texture of the floor, which I love, interesting flooring. And of course the light colored lines on the floor adds so much to the image.

Excellent PoV. :)

Sophia

Wlison, that serries is planed to be presented on the wall of the art center with the Galla of that dance at the end of the year.

 

The link is in Hebrew, that is the initial part of the Chreographer's Catalogue about the dance, with my photo from the series and under it my name and credit as the photographer. http://www.bamania.co.il/midbar/teachers/yosiy.htm