Jennifer

This is my first real session with my niece who really works like a

real model. What do you think of the composition and lightning?

Thanks for your help.

You sure she is not a model? Well I like portraiture and I really like this portrait. The expression given is excellent. Not sure about the hand but the cascading shadow does give it a unique effect. Very good though well done!

Overall his is very well done. I love the placement of the hand, the expression, the fall of her hair. If I might make one suggestion, the light tone of her shirt appearing between the open lapels of her coat is a little light. I find it attracts my eye too much. My eye wants to be attracted more to her face, but that shirt is too strong a pull in the other direction.

 

Jennifer should be encouraged to sit for you again!

Very nice like a lot the pose and expression and the light is soft but good you can see good details!

every thing is excellent.congrats.