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The idea is a good one, but the image could use some work. I feel like the swirls are disracting at their intensity, if you could make them more organic It hink that would be better, more dream like and a little less greatful dead. and perhaps a more muted soft background, perhaps something that flows w/ the bubbles. the black seems to flat to aid it the expression of fluidness it seems your going for.

 

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Robin

I agree with Robin, and I'm a Deadhead. I dig the vision you're trying to achieve but unfortunately this image hurts my brain a little. It's fluid, but in a hard, extreme way. I think a softer edge on the swirls and bubbles in conjunction with a more liquid-y sense of movement might work better, not to mention a background that works with all that as well. BUT... remember to keep ownership of the image. Experiment! Your ultimate satisfaction is what's important. I encourage you to keep at it! Best, James