the wire-3

comments pls...

excellent capture,

subject is placed well and giving some space for the girl to see.

Nice Shot !!

the wire is to close to her face, otherwise very nice

I like how youve use the wire to lead to her face. I think if you would have raised your camera jsut a litle, so that the wire isnt touching her chin, it would have been a little better. Besides that, great cropping and focus. Well done.

Very cool!

Parvin, I like this theme with the wire and this is my favourite amongst the three so far. I do wish that her chin was a little more "detached" from the wire. I might consider cropping a bit off the right side of the image - i.e. perhaps down the middle of the wood pole or just right of it. Good work and it looks like I'm not the only one a roll.

Great! The expression of this woman makes me think there is a story here. The wire and tree box her in. Great composition and capture here.

Expressive work ... regards ...

An arresting image, Parvin - my pick of the wire series. May I ask what the 'story' here is? That barb wire makes my imagination go a little wild and disturbed... Have you considered cropping a touch to bring her into the frame? At present she looks a little lost... but, that might be your intent. M :)

michael,i wanted to create a series of images that would make people use their own imagination as to the 'story' attached.like what is on the other side of the wire and does it actually stop people from crossing?i left space on her side as i wanted her to be looking into it.thx for ur detailed and insightful comment.

Very nicely taken, love the composition. ~Regards.

Does wire stop people from crossing? Rarely by itself, I feel. I really like the elements you have presented here, Parvin. She could be 'caged' and looking out. Or, 'free' and looking in. She could be leaving a place of tragedy, or arriving to begin a life of tragedy. There are just so many elements. Very, very effective, Parvin. M :)