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Piston


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Excellent composition, with wonderfully gritty, grainy look. Since this is already so good, let me pick nits. I think the camera could have been positioned slightly more to the right, thus including the hinge (or whatever) we see on the right border and omitting the bits of two bolts on the left border. Also, you might be able to squeeze a bit more tone separation out of the shadows under the piston. And I'm wondering if perhaps this looks a bit oversharpened, though I'm not sure. OFF> Fundamentally, I love the composition and textures in this one. Good series, hope there are more to come.
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