kslonaker 0 Posted March 25, 2006 I can't decide if the hands are too large or if it helps convey the idea that all the strength in the world can't get a person freed from a life they don't like. Comments? Link to comment
home page1 0 Posted March 25, 2006 Your recent plunge into more of graphic arts is a nice extension of your photography skills and very interesting. This one has real dramatic impact with the outstretched hands and nice symmetry of composition. The caption is also a good fit. Link to comment
jasonwilliamsphotography 0 Posted March 25, 2006 Scary shot, I love it! Nice composition, tone fit perfect! Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted March 25, 2006 I don't know...it would be interesting to see the face larger, but this has great impact! Link to comment
kslonaker 0 Posted March 25, 2006 My husband doesn't like this one at all, but I will leave this up for discussion for a while. It's fun to do different things every now and again. I might try different size combinations on the hands and face to see how that will work. Link to comment
afterthoughts 0 Posted March 25, 2006 I agree with what Ken said. I think this image moves you from "fun" photography to "serious" subliminal photography. Also, this image is dominated by the masculine side rather than the feminine side which may be why hubby doessn't like it. I think its brilliant! Link to comment
aepelbacher 0 Posted March 25, 2006 Maybe Ed doesn't like the dark feel or what ... but it's another interesting statement. What I love are the EYES. Did you enhance them? Or does this man have these fabulous eyes really? The hands aren't too big for me ... and I wouldn't have even thought about it until I read your comment. Link to comment
flyfisher159 0 Posted March 25, 2006 HI Kim. Great idea but how about making the hands smaller and making the face less distinct but then bring out the eyes more. Dark hollow eyes, lost eyes???? Just a thought. Keep up the fantastic work. Stephen Link to comment
kslonaker 0 Posted March 25, 2006 Thanks for the detailed comments, everyone. This is actually a head shot of my son, but definitely considerably altered - his eyes are more blue/gray. I think I'll play with this one a bit more. Ed probably doesn't care for it because he knows my son and he's not a dark person at all, so Ed may be having a hard time seeing David out of context or something. Link to comment
markboyer 0 Posted March 25, 2006 Truly a new dimension for you. And this one is a whole new level of quality and artistic vision than your previous efforts in this genre. It is graphically inventive and emotionally integrated. Wow. Link to comment
haleh b 0 Posted March 26, 2006 It was a clever idea to make the hands dominate the image. He seems to be much smaller than the problem in hand otherwise he is trapped. Link to comment
kslonaker 0 Posted March 26, 2006 I did another one with the head larger and only partial hands, but I don't find it fits the concept of "trapped" as well. Guess I'll leave well enough alone! Thanks for visiting and commenting, Haleh. Link to comment
haleh b 0 Posted March 26, 2006 I meant what I said of course as a compliment. I like the big hands representing a sense of entrapment. Link to comment
kslonaker 0 Posted March 26, 2006 I knew what you meant, Haleh, and took it as a compliment. :) I made the hands dominating to represent him trying to escape, but it's futile for him. I did try other versions to see how it would look, but keep coming back to this one. Link to comment
ilana_go 0 Posted March 26, 2006 I love this work! It makes you think, and that's what is all about!!!!! So go on, Kim, with your trials and errors, you'll find "it", that way or the other!!!! Link to comment
donnaalbers 0 Posted March 26, 2006 You're moving away from the comfort zone in photography. . . a powerful image. . . I agree the hands could be a little bit smaller, but the main thing I would like to see would be more anquish in his expression. . . Link to comment
kslonaker 0 Posted March 26, 2006 Donna, since this was just a demo shot I had taken of my son last year, can't do anything more with the expression. I was showing David how the different attachments to a flash work and shot off three pictures of him to show him. Nothing was posed. I've gotten a lot of mileage out of those shots, much to David's dismay. Now that I have this concept, I might someday try to shoot the elements with the final composition in mind. Thanks for commenting. Link to comment
sarahunderhill 1 Posted March 27, 2006 Hi Kim, I don't know what to say about this one. I love the hands, I love the title, I love the whole idea. I wonder how it would look w/ your son in color..or the hands in b&W. Overall, this is awesome! Very interesting. Looking forward to more! Link to comment
kslonaker 0 Posted March 28, 2006 Thanks, Sarah. These are fun to do, but sometimes I scare myself! Where do these dark ones come from??!! Link to comment
jimmcnitt 0 Posted April 4, 2006 Hi Kim: I backtracked here from your comment on "Chronic Pain" -- and I'm glad I did! There's no ambiguity about the basic message -- everything conveys the feeling of TRAPPED!! Because of the size and possition of the hands, the feeling I get is that the harder he pushes, the more deeply he becomes entombed. "Where do the dark one's come from?" My opinion: they are as much a part of life as night is a part of each day. --jim Link to comment
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