Her Debut

Feedback?

I like the balance of the photo, and their expressions are good. But action is usually better than posing, and it looks like she's there to sing, so I would like to see her singing while the musicians played. For a posed shot, those music stands could have been briefly set aside.

Too bad the violist left has is eyes shut but then again maybe that's part of the image. Overall I like this image, not as an portait but kind of "special moments in daily ;ife documentary style kind of thing" (am I making any sense?)

Shame of the cords and cables on the floor and very maybe the photo good have been taking from a slightly lower angle but overall 6/5 in my opinion

It looked to me like the violinist was looking down, not that he had eyes shut- but that could be it.