jabarbero 0 Posted March 5, 2006 Me gusta mucho la composicion estetica, aunque creo que al cielo se le podria sacar un poquito mas si fuera mas dramatico. Un saludo Link to comment
carmenlafuente 0 Posted March 5, 2006 Pues tienes razon, en esta los cables forman una figura geometrica muy vistosa con esos entrecruces lineales. Como te comenta Mindaugas, en B/N, se le puede sacar tambien partido a la imagen. Link to comment
federomero 0 Posted March 5, 2006 Muy buena composicion, juego de lineas paralelas de cables y edificios. Link to comment
guillelobera 0 Posted March 6, 2006 Composicion excelente pero le falta dramatismo como alguno te dice. Link to comment
manuelbayo1 0 Posted March 6, 2006 Muy bonita, currilla. Un poco mas de vida en los colores? Link to comment
curra 0 Posted March 6, 2006 Era casi de noche y estos son los colores reales. Es curioso que no se me ha ocurrido tranformarlos en aras de la estetica. Link to comment
nino1 0 Posted March 6, 2006 Excelente! me gusta en color, se puede intentar en bw, pienso que pueda trabajar tambien con mas suceso. Link to comment
hansio 0 Posted March 6, 2006 I can imagine that you do not have the full control over your images untill now. That is not a rotten remark, but a fact as I see it. Therefore I took the liberty of correcting this image a little bit for you, so perhaps it can be a stimulance for you to start working on it. What I did is not more then I would have done in the darkroom. So no dirty tricks, but only some corrections. I mainly corrected the perspective and also the balnce in dark and light. Let me know what you like about it and start working on it. You have many images who deserve a good technique. Hasta la proxima. Hansio. Link to comment
curra 0 Posted March 6, 2006 Thanks for your time and comment. The matter is I took the pic at sunset, almost night, and I have used the PS just to reproduce what i remember. I did not realize I could play with the levels to increase the beauty of the pic. Link to comment
pepa_de_rivera1 0 Posted March 7, 2006 Currita, yo la simplificaria un poco haciendo un crop justo donde acaban los cables en el extremo derecho, porque la composici�n en X de los cables con la parte superior del edificio es magnifica, pero toda la parte de abajo no aporta nada y le quita limpieza a la toma. Link to comment
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