coolhand 0 Posted February 24, 2006 I like the lines in this, not perfect otherwise, I'd appreciate feedback! Link to comment
mvilar 0 Posted February 24, 2006 It is an interesting picture, the tones are rich and the sky is well defined. However when a look at the picture my eyes do not stop at one point, they go around and around without stopping... I think that is due to the "fuge" of lines, right on the water-shore, then left at the dunes, then the back horizon and the cloud line right again... I do not how to explain that feeling. Anyway the picture is nice and I like it. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted March 1, 2006 I'm seeing what you're seeing here, Lucas. It's pretty amazing, the huge zigzag and the wonderful complementary shapes of sea, land, cloud, and sky. This is a difficult one to critique; I need to think about it more. What you've seen here is indeed nicely seen -- it's downright cool -- but somehow the image as a whole doesn't quite hang together. Maybe Marcal is right: The problem is that it lacks a focus of interest, and the presence of a human figure or a piece of architecture or some animals about a third of the way in from right would unify the composition. The basic structure you've got here is very, very interesting, though. Link to comment
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