aepelbacher 0 Posted February 21, 2006 This one was rather difficult to shoot ... I think that I must have taken a dozen or more different shots of this guy ... he was playing on the patio of a restaurant, and the only truly good shot of him would have been to get myself seated in the restaurant (which is not where we wanted to eat). He was surrounded by these fake trees and I ended up sticking my camera, head, and arms into one of them to grab this shot with a long lens. Yeah. I felt a little obnoxious doing so, but after so many failed shots, it was all that i could come up with. :-) What are your thoughts? Do the people in the background (top left) distract? Is the DOF too shallow? Any other suggestions? Link to comment
rafikrkamel 1 Posted February 21, 2006 Nice photo, however as u sad i find the trees in the foreground a bit distracting, good job though. also i think the DOF needs to be very shallow for this type of shot, good job\though, best regards, RK! Link to comment
afterthoughts 0 Posted February 23, 2006 Well, the image has a few problems here and there. I must say that I have had same experiance and the same few problems many more times than I would like to admidt. I'll give you credit for going to all that trouble in trying to make the shot in the first place. Three ADAGIRLS! Link to comment
alberto.conde 0 Posted February 24, 2006 Quite a few problems indeed! Probably, my advice would be to get closer (with your zoom) and get rid of the wooden stand behind, also, choose as wide an aperture as possible in order to get a shallow DOF and get the backgound off focus. This works very well with portraits.Cheer up! Weekend is here! Link to comment
henrimanguy 0 Posted February 24, 2006 Considering the difficulties you had to shot him, the better thing to do, in my opinion, was to open the diaphragme at the max in order that the background will be totally blured. The objects you can see behind him are very distracting. Regards, Henri. Link to comment
kslonaker 0 Posted February 25, 2006 If you have more room to crop, you could easily improve this, imo. A smaller square, just around the man and guitar could work, I think. Background is a little busy, but I see why you wanted to go for it. Link to comment
aepelbacher 0 Posted February 25, 2006 Kim - thanks!! I tried that idea and liked it. Here you go... Link to comment
wilsontsoi 0 Posted February 25, 2006 In addition to the crop suggestion, I'd say darken the top left and brighten the man & guitar to make him center of attention instead of the easel board behind. The surrounding branches and trees work somewhat as framing devices. Link to comment
colin carron 58,916 Posted March 3, 2006 Well done for getting what you have! I agree with the closer crop. I think this is a situation where you got the best shot going without actually going into the restaurant. Link to comment
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