robidooo 0 Posted February 19, 2006 To be honnest with you, I really find that the frame is distracting way too much. Otherwise, the composition would be better it there were more space in front of the bird (where it is looking) and less on it's back. I think it would be more dynamic this way. Also, the burned highlights on the head of the bird are not helping. Hope you don't mind the comment, I'm trying to be constructive. Regards. Link to comment
rejith 1 Posted February 19, 2006 I am a bit distracted by that yellow framing and the red lettering, friend Allan .. A dark shade for the frame will make it a lot pleasing to look at ... I think the eyes drift more to the frame than to the bird ... Apart from that, nicely captures ... I like the details .. Link to comment
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