One ring

Thanks for your ratings.

Does have a bit of that snapshot look about it. Party photos from the swingers club. Some photoshop work on those stretch marks an bikini line would hurt.

I think you could benefit from a little more attention to composition here. The angle leaves distractions in the background. The light is not bad but looks like direct flash... and the subject matter is not really all that compelling. Is that a wedding ring? Then why am i staring at her crotch? Also, she's got some blemishes- the scratchmarks and the pantyline stubble- that you could focus on as a more targeted subjest, though here they just kinda take away from the scene. Take control of your model and your surroundings and find an angle that really works, then shoot and shoot until you get something that looks good. I also suggest Photoshop... good luck.

 

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Really is an event, is not a session of studio with lights, only with direct flash. Thanks for your commentaries.

This I agree is not one of your best. Just took a look at your pictures...they are very, very good.....maybe one day I will be able to do portraits that good.....Peace, Annie

I know that I have bad shots and some good ones, I am in the search of excellent shots, thanks for your visit :-)