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coquine seeking critique d jf

Gallery: Black & white

Tags: seeking critique

Category: Nude and Erotic

Published: Wednesday 1st of February 2006 04:14:38 AM


Todd Kuhns
I agree as well, technically this image is poorly done. It looks like a snapshot gone wrong. Yes, the motion in the hand and the sharp eye are interesting but that is it. You could crop only that, up the contrast to give the shot some life and then you might have something nice.

Alberto Pareto
Sorry, could someone explain why this image can be seen in the top rated with 7/7 (5 ratings), while having a lot of lower ratings? By the way, you have better shots in your portfolio. Regards Alberto

Jack Blake
hmmm... I don't usually comment negatively.. But my first reaction on seeing this shot in "Top Photos", (especially after just recieving 3/3's on portraits that I actually WORKED at), was "gee.. if it shows a body part it must be good, so perhaps I should be more opportunistic".. Now granted, I know that MY images aren't very daring.. in fact I KNOW I'm pretty boring. And I guess this is a little daring. FAR more "daring" than anything in my portfolio.. But.. I just don't get it. The light is flat, the composition is awkward, angle is horrible.. it just looks like a lazy snapshot from the other side of the bed to me.. and a poor one at that. And yet the ratings are great. There are FAR better images all over photonet (and in your portfolio) that get poorer ratings.. probably because the subjects are clothed. Go figure.

Benjamin Bond
I have to agree as first impression was that the photographer meant to post on

Michael Haydon
about 2 to be honest Yes it is poor, no doubt. I've seen a few of these recently. I might be wrong but could it be that the photographer timed the posting of this snap, phoned his/her fellow snappers and said 'as soon as you see my poor nude snapshot pop up, rate it 7/7' !? easily done.

Paul Chepikian
Something very compelling about this image. I'm not certain whether it's the motion of her hand, her eye making contact with the viewer, don't know but there is something there. About the only distsraction seems to be the shadow, watch, bracelet on her wrist. Otherwise, a very wonderful nude portrait. Congratulations.

Jimmy Miller
Yeah, what he said. It is a very nice photo - different from most others (original).

jf d
thank Paul & Jimmy I appreciate

John Peri
I think this is a very funny thread. The success of a photo is a function of how much attention it draws and not what any individual thinks of it. The fact that so many people love to hate it is pertinent to it's significance. Actually, I find it a compelling image and I understand why people are drawn to it!

Jan Peter
This is ridiculous Hacking the TRP does not make this a good photo.

Muriel caron
how wonderful is this shot ! so alive. It remembers a Cartier Bresson'photo... Thank you JFD for this sincere moment.

jf d
good morning I am wery please of theses comments! Making jealous some good photographers and others (beleiving they are..)is quite pleasant! Go on guys success will come!! And of course a big MERCI (in my french language)to all visitors with nice comments and ratings JF

Alberto Pareto
Thanks for your answer Clint. And I suppose it is too late now to get to the image and rate it anonymously ... you are supposed to go through the whole list of submissions, aren't you? Or is there a better way? Just to understand how this cryptic system works. Alberto

laurentiu posarlie
imposible that is a mistery how a picture like this can be in top rated photos!

Mike Cheal
I'll stand up and be counted My intitial reaction was I don't often see photos like this at the top of the pile so I took a proper look. The comments do make me wonder about how people deal with their judgement coming into question. As an artform, it's healthy that we are all forced to sometimes re-evaluate what we see as 'good' or 'bad'. The more I've seen of this photograph, the more I've liked it - much like a good record is rarely instantly loved but grows on you. Congrats jf

Sergey Skleznev
My 5 (euro)cents IMO, this shot is seird at least. Moreover, I find it very unpleasant. Here is nothing to talking about, and moreover - no reasons to put it on a top. Somebody here remembers Cartier Bresson... poor Cartier Bresson!

Anders Hingel
In my view you seem all to be right, but you comment on different things. According to a number of very valid criteria this is indeed a bad photo (angle, composition, blurred etc) but it is also a photo with a very pronounced spell to it (the gesture of the girl, the eye, the surroundings of tissues etc). I therefore understand if someone would say that it is a photo that is doomed to receive 3-4/3-4 or 6-7:6-7 - but never 5/5. In front of such a photo you take position. That might be the ultimate quality of the thing. I would love to see the similar type of discussion when we next time get a 7/7 photo on the screen of the traditional scene of over saturated landscapes.

jf d
I am so please to have such a success and so many visitors for this photo. I can't hide it and I thank you all very much. I will not make any more arguments with a few guys who take photography for anything but pleasure and forgot humour and fair play. Amicalement

Paul Chepikian
Well there you have it, JfD. As they say, the gallery has spoken. It is all subjective isn't it? You have caused ripples in the pond, take pride in that. I gave you the first comment on this one and though it is merely my opinion, I still feel the photo is compelling. Suffice it to say, we all have an opinion. Good luck!

jf d
Sergey I am sorry you don't like However pleased you had time to write while looking at it...or are you more interested than what you said...?

Robert Semnic
I will join most of the other authors in low rating of this photo. I usualy do not spend time on bad photos and do not rate low. Composition, light, person, movement, everything for me is under average. It is a miracle how this photo managed to recieve so many comments.

jf d
feelings... First : I am not pride. WE feel happy an pleased! 1 photo top first rated. 4 photos in the 13 first better ranking. 1 folder in the 6 more view. 2 photos over 50000 views. All this, just 12 days after joining PN. What a wonderfull welcome! So 0.0000...% unlucky people, shows the very best and good fair play of PN participants. REALLY THANK YOU Photography for my Muse and I is a pleasure only. We do hope to give as many as possible good moments to PN participants even if we know how difficult it will be to do it again Carpe diem. and ..."good night and good luck" Such a free place is rare... preserve it! Sincere regards JF & Muriel

jf d
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