Taken during afternoon break at work

Taken during an afternoon break at work. Used Agfa enhanced color

film, don't remember ISO. At the time, I was using a Canon Rebel 2000

camera, and it was nothing but problems. More then every other shot's

automatic exposure was wrong. I exchanged it for another Rebel 2000

and had the same problems. I had used a previous model of Rebel for

two years before that and never had a problem. Anyhow, LaTrice posed

for me many times during breaks at work. I hope to find her photos

and post them soon.

Not sure why you've stuck her in the dead centre of a horizontal frame. There are not enough good qualities in the photo to handle such ordinary composition. Lovely smile and lighting, but this film doesn't do any favours to skin tones.

Thank you for your honest critique. I hadn't even heard of the rule of thirds until long after this photo was taken. It could be corrected with cropping, but I posted the photo as I took it. And it was the wrong film choice. I was experimenting at the time, trying to learn photography on my own. LaTrice was kind enough to model for me many times in the process.