P 31

Please your crituque, thanks!

Is it just my dirty glasses, or is she a bit blurred? The sharp focus seems to be on the edged of her collar just in front of her face. I love the depth in the picture though, and her cheeky pose - lovely composition.

Great expression on her face.

 

However... your shot is by no means sharp enough. You have to crop top and right because you've got too much empty space that serves no purpose around you subject. And finally, your shot seems poorly exposed and you are missing contrast. If you leave the sky (top right) out of your composition your light meter will meter more accurately and your exposure will be better. Alternatively, crop and use PS to up contrast.

 

Just some suggestions - feel free to disagree,

 

Tom