Girl and Flash II

A continuation from 'Girl and Flash.'

Feebdack appreciated.

Should there be anyone looking for my more daring work, you can always do a search for me on photopoints or photosig where I have uploaded some of my deleted images and where I will be uploading more soon.

This is another great step forward in a series. I don't know if she should not be placed just a tad more to the right in the image despite the fact that I almost never center an image. In any event, another beginning well done.

-Cheers

Interesting photo. The only issue that caught my attention is the bright spot on the forehead between the eye brows.

The focus on the open mouth and chin is good. The snap or button on the shirt adds an interesting asymetry.

Owen, Thanks again. I do like her placement in this photograph. I can understand why some might feel uncomfortable with it. Thanks as always.

Keith, The hot spot between the eyes is a touch annoying. I do love the button though. Believe it or not, I didn't notice the button until after I uploaded the photo. Thanks a lot.

I like this one a lot, David. It has a touch of an alien flavor for me...don't know why, actually. The hot spot doesn't bother me all that much, as it's sort of centered between the catchlights in her eyes. The button is a nice detail!

And being more than a little off-center myself, the off-center composition works for me, too.

Thanks for the comment on this one. I am having difficulty responding because quite honestly I have no idea why I framed this off centre. It just felt right.

As for the button being a nice touch... I think the button is a nice piece of luck... but please don't tell anyone.