henrimanguy 0 Posted December 31, 2005 About one month ago I loaded this photo and requested critique but it had very little success and no one critique. If you give low ratings, could you tell me what does'nt work in it ? Thank you and happy new year. Link to comment
urspeter 0 Posted December 31, 2005 I like it a lot! the catstone and the modern concrete, separated by the buildings - nice. Though the angle is a bit too much in the straight diagonal line for my taste. I also would have tried to push back the dominant blue, any dot of an other colour would improve it even more. Link to comment
henrimanguy 0 Posted December 31, 2005 Thank you Peter. The dominant blue is due to the overcast sky and rainy weather. It is very difficult to remove it because there is almost only blue in the photo (except by colorization but this is not what I want). Regards. Link to comment
pjmeade 12 Posted December 31, 2005 Hello Henri, this is an interesting image, but I find myself wondering, why look in the gutter when you can look in the sky? Very best for 2006 Link to comment
henrimanguy 0 Posted December 31, 2005 This is also the question I ask to me, Peter. Happy new year. Link to comment
colin carron 58,916 Posted January 1, 2006 I must have missed this one when you uploaded it first, Henri. I like the way you have got the reflection in the water. It might work toned in a different colour as well. Link to comment
frederick eberhart 0 Posted January 1, 2006 Henri, excellent study of texture and light! I wish you a Happy New Year! Fred Link to comment
henrimanguy 0 Posted January 1, 2006 Thank you for all your comments, and happy new year to all. Link to comment
dens 4 Posted January 2, 2006 an interesting relection, you may like some that i just posted. all the best for the new year, Link to comment
ell 0 Posted January 3, 2006 Even the gutter has something to offer when we open our eyes to the world ... ; ) The blue creates the mood here. Most interesting. Happy New Year and keep snapping. Eileen Link to comment
henrimanguy 0 Posted January 3, 2006 Thank you for your comments. I have made a new version (above) with less cyan. Is it better ? Link to comment
lauro1 0 Posted January 4, 2006 I like the last one best. But both are interesting, not only for the dominant blue, but for the diagonal composition which works here extremely well. (Happy new year.) Link to comment
photos of hans koot 0 Posted January 5, 2006 Both very good photos Henry, the other one more dominant and dynamically in lines, this one with more attention to the reflected old houses. I find myself (still using film) having same problems with overcast sky...or near sunset.. blue or magenta..specially with long exposures with slow film.. no whitebalance or whatsoever to get colors straight.. less cyan looks better to me sure. Also reason for me to switch soon to the digital world... Link to comment
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